Tuesday, 12 April 2011

Brainstorm

Heres all my ideas about my essay, its themes and how I want to begin.

Essay Help and structure

I have been recieving extra help with my essay and I think its improved the way I think about structure and format of my essay.

Here are my notes:


Reflection on my presentation

In preperation for my essay one of the tasks we had to complete was to give a presentation. Im not very good at speaking out loud but to  my suprise everything went really well and I got some great feedback.

Because during my presentation it came clear that I was trying to take on too many subjects, one of my main imrovment points was to narrow down my ideas and relate to only one subject matter. I think I also need to define this more and do further research.
From the feedback I have now decided I want to concentrate on Status symbols in embroidery rather than the environmental issues.



My feedback

I was also given some research suggestions which is great and will help me further my ideas.