Reflection on my presentation

In preperation for my essay one of the tasks we had to complete was to give a presentation. Im not very good at speaking out loud but to  my suprise everything went really well and I got some great feedback.

Because during my presentation it came clear that I was trying to take on too many subjects, one of my main imrovment points was to narrow down my ideas and relate to only one subject matter. I think I also need to define this more and do further research.
From the feedback I have now decided I want to concentrate on Status symbols in embroidery rather than the environmental issues.

My feedback

I was also given some research suggestions which is great and will help me further my ideas.